Funny

Just my own perspective.

Funny

How we just believe

Believe what is in front?

Funny

How we disapprove

Of something

Something that gets out of our way

As years pass by 

We pass down our tradition

And with those

Our belief

For us

Our system works like that

Where everything around us

Shines just the same amount

The amount our eyes are used to

Till now

Now,

I don’t say that’s bad

I just

Would like to discontinue that

Rather I would love to

Squint my eyes just a little more

To have a glance

To a brighter world

Traditions are gold

But restrictions are not

I think

Now, right now

I’m old enough

To build my own

Rules

I know

There will come a time

When my time will pass

I would recommend my lineage

To have their own built world.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Let people think for themselves and not be led by traditions and prejudice. Just because something has been done or thought of in a particular way does not mean that it is right. I think all of us should question as much as possible before we come to conclusions. You know as I get older I certainly hope that I become wiser. This is where you took me supernova. Thanks for posting.

Chris

[supernova_thoughts]

Age is just a door to freedom. Thank you, Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)

[Nima.Hope]

"Traditions are gold but restrictions are not" is a very true quote. It's not always good to do things people want. We should decide not them. People often act as "While in Rome, do as the Romans do" and I don't appreciate this thought.
Thanks for sharing it.

[supernova_thoughts]

Thank you for stopping by, Nima! Good day!

[Nima.Hope]

My pleasure!

[John the Baptist]

Tradition can be supportive, but it can also become restrictive. What is good for one generative may not be so for its successor. Thus we have to examine our own traditions to see what is empowering us and what is holding us back. As the speaker here says, there comes a time when we are old enough to make our own rules.

[supernova_thoughts]

Yes, it's not always necessary to have the same walls. Thank you for stopping by, John. Great day!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

check first line, second stanza.
But Oh, if only squinting would work now...the world is so dark with all that is happening.
we do need some golden moments...
and as far as aging...I am there now...at that point where "I'm old enough/ to build my own /Rules"
I don't have to please others anymore...and it does feel pretty damn good.
I like this write, mucho!

[supernova_thoughts]

Thank you so much for the correction and stopping by. Take care!