Blindness

The blind are much wiser than we think

The world may be black,

But I can see so much more.

I see the heart;

By the sound of pain;

By the sound of hope,

I see the world;

By the sound of humanity;

By the sound of

I see lives;

By the sound of laughter;

By the sound of crying,

I see everything;

By the gift of blindness

Author's Note

Any tips? I'm new here, it would really help! I hope you liked it :)

Reviews

[Ubiquitous]

Wow, a profound work! My only tip is to say that the title foreshadows the end maybe a bit too much, maybe a title having to do with sounds would suit better? The senses work flawlessly in your piece, welcome to Writer's Cafe!

[Me]

Fantastic!!! Great piece...

[TPK Stories]

Good job...