My Flaming Passion

To My Beloved King, Belial.

 

When my eyes fell upon you,

My heart jumped again.

I didn't believe it is true,

It's driving me insane.

You gazed at me, right into me,

With wide shiny eyes.

There's no better place I'd rather be,

Than right here in your arms.

And when night falls upon me,

Would you hold my hand?

Would you always comfort me,

And tell me it's all fine?

There's so much, I want to say,

Everything I feel.

I love you more every single day,

I hardly believe you are real.

Reviews

[Rhine Wolf]

lovely touching and warm!! loved it!

(PS. typo: Would you always comfort me,
And tell be "me" it's all fine?)

not a biggy, just wanted to mention it!

Blessed be,
Fallon

[poetic soul]

its nicely framed... really cute.....lovely love poem!! nice picture to go with it...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Ahmad Alhour]

O, sweety !
It's so lovely and nicely written, I can't even find the true words to express the haunted feeling I have just realized... it is a great one indeed...

Great Job Darling.