Oh Sunrise

So wonderful

Beautiful

Unique

Yet another

 

Purples and pinks

Yesterday

Blues and grays

Today

 

Bright

And burning

Like a glowing

Fire

 

Sweet

And cooling

Like a beach

An ocean

 

I can’t help

But stare

To watch

Admire

 

Yet

I can’t for long

No time

Today

 

Too soon gone

I’ve lost you

Again

 

So till tomorrow

I’ll think of you

And watch

Out my window

Reviews

[Jeff]

Great work. You've painted a very vivid image here.

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~ oh, this is such a magical piece of writing... i loved the way you mentioned colours... and the way you closed this piece... beautiful work... :)

[Sunset Girl]

thank you. I took the picture on my way to work. I had a hard time with the ending, cause I really wanted it to say "out my rearview window" but I couldn't make it right and didn't want the idea of rearview window with the past.

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~ it's a stunning picture... ~ ah, i like this ending more... the struggle was well worth it... :)

[ashw]

Maybe tomorrow I'll wake up early....Great poem.

[Sunset Girl]

The promise of a new colorful day is a great start to my day.

[rivers]

This makes me smile :) There is something special about the renewed beginnings of the dawn...absorbing the darkness and turning it colorfully into a fresh new day's shining light...

[Sunset Girl]

I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this piece. The darkness to light is a powerful transformation on its own. (I say this as I'm watching the sun come out after a week of rain and my mood improving).