But you can't

But you can't

A Poem by Dan

But you can't

 

I witnessed your renaissance,

Radiating confidence,

I saw you change,

Watched your ego alter,

Jekyll hid from Hyde,

Came through stronger,

Trying to be better, but

you can't perfect perfection.

 

Wading through rejection,

I see through your charity,

Clarity is mine at last,

My needs left wanting,

Watched you blossom,

Poison ivy climbing,

Don't really want to want you but

you can't affect affection.

© 2010 Dan


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You play so well with words in this write. This is also a write that seems to show a lot of intellect. All I can say on this one is "wow!"

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this hon!
Its a sad fact that even though the mind says no, the heart says still finds an attraction with people we shouldn't if we have been hurt:)
"Poison ivy climbing,

Don't really want to want you but

you can't affect affection.".........Wonderful imagery!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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A Poem by Dan