The Pain-Mongers Opinion

The Pain-Monger’s Opinion

 

Those irons of yours are far too hot

The Pain Monger implied

He won’t feel a bloody thing

When you tear out his insides

 

And furthermore

 

That blade is too sharp

Those hooks are not barbed

And each of those weights

Are way too light

To have any impact whatsoever

 

In fact

 

To be perfectly blunt

Since he no longer responds

To any of your non verbal commands

It would appear

You are a total failure

The Pain Monger eventually sighed

 

 

Reviews

[Circe]

hmm.. I can understand this as when you give someone too much at once, they go into shock.. and don't feel a thing, like when you are beyond pain and you're over the limit, there's nothing else that can possibly hurt you more... and your senses have shut down... there is a rawness here that affects deeply.

[Neville]

Hmm.. or they are dead of course which was my original idea but I think I like your take on this even more, thank you again Circe

[Circe]

oh I didn't realise that.. it works too!

[lee von cleef]

and the eyes all moved, his too.

[Neville]

You lost me Lee, but then I am very tired

[lee von cleef]

I guess I was reflecting bourbon,I saw a beaten passion,alive even after the beating,his eyes following the herds.But the day is young, I try again latter.

[Neville]

Yeah, I would appreciate that my Friend, N