Bring it On

only your opinion matters...........

Bring it On

 

Every now and then

I stumble on the truth

Dont we…

 

And it happens

 

Without us looking

Maybe we should look

Less often…

 

As it happens

 

Only every now and then

It makes perfect sense

To let it be…

 

When it happens

 

Don’t hold back then

Embrace the moment

Bring it on…

 

Then afterwards

 

Enjoy the moment

Sshh let it go

But keep the memory

 

Author's Note

you may not like it but there are no grammatical errors on this page...

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha well like it or no .... here i go a readin' :)))))))
how interesting my friend .. bit of a different view and musings from you ... so ..on reading i now am considering how very true it is that we, many times "find" when we stop "looking" ... how grasping at an enjoyable moment can take it away from us in a flash ... excuse me right now sir .. i am enjoying this moment .. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh and another.. ahhhhhhhhhhhh ;) thanks for pointing the direction
E.

[Neville]

Bless yah Gene my good buddy... much appreciated & then some... and get this.. I've never had so many ahhhhhhhh's before.. not even when I wrote about me honeymoon night.... :)))))

Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

[Neville]

.......... N is :)ing here & it feels so ahhhhhhhhh but I think you know what I mean Gene :)

[Fay Slimm]

Enjoying a moment can stay in the heart for always and ever - and I found that by accident only recently............... aaahhhhh what a thrill to look back without anger but only with love ....... aaahhhh yes.... great read.......... Fay

[Neville]

Thank you Fay and congratulations too :) Neville

[lightsong]

hhhaaa Your note made me laugh hard, yes I don't like it because I'm jealous :D

now back to Your "no grammatical errors" poem, wise words dear N~ truth comes when we least expect it, when we let it go, surrender and flow with the flow, and when it happens, we must embrace it, remember the feeling because it's a proof for us to hold and keep. Your experienced self is shown here yet again in these words.

[Neville]

You really are spoiling me Gh.. but do ya hear me complain... no of course not.. I love it... N :)

[lightsong]

I hear nothing but happy laughters :) :) :)

[Neville]

that's probably me.....

[Chris Shaw]

Life comprises many pathways. We search many on our journey. We are continually searching in my opinion. Life is not static. We do not stand still. There is movement, plenty of it.Good morning Neville, that is where your lines led me this morning. On another day they might lead me somewhere else.

Chris

[Neville]

Thank you Chris & Good Morning to you too.

N.

[Mrudula Rani]

In my opinion, it is the most beautiful, purposeful proposals ever written in a lovely poem.A Profound perception! Absolutely brilliant.

[Neville]

what a delightful gift of sentiment you have left for me here all wrapped in wonderful words, the tools of our trade... bless you M and true.... N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we all search for that truth...don't we? and when we find it, it is a great moment...but then quickly it is gone and we are searching for another.
Strong write, Neville.
j.

[Neville]

Too bloomin true... thank you jacob... am just wondering if you are experiencing any current problems here at the Cafe.. I have had a lot of difficulty gaining access... just wondering whether it is just me.... N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Not tonight...the other day I was getting the "the moderators have banned you from the site" but I think that happened because they were working on getting the spammers and trolls off the board...
and it seems pretty much back to normal right now.
j.

[Neville]

thank you jacob.. I hope you are right .. it seems that way here too.

N.

[sette]

wahoo... bring it on definitely let me remember one thing there are really some things worth remembering even though it brought us pain still it should be remembered