Amused

just a thought captured....

Amused

 

While well worth

The wait

As oft might be the case

 

She gifts a pause

Our muse is amused

Ne’er she seldom hesitates

 

Author's Note

This box should be re-named thus
'Note for those who take a peek but are far too shy to leave their DNA behind' ..... and of course you others... N

Reviews

[lightsong]

when a poem will come out, all the waiting is worth, and our muse will be happily "amused" speaking of this, honestly I didn't ever think that my latest one will be that "famous" LOL and for Your note, You know I never was shy to leave my DNA behind ;)

[Neville]

you ma'am.. as always are far too kind... and generous with your literary DNA.... Neville :)

[lightsong]

"literary DNA" I love this, the ma'am too :) and my DNA thank You!

[Neville]

Good to know... and me too :)

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

I found this to be a rather cute write, in a amusing way, nicely written

[Neville]

then I have at least done something write... Bless ya Kescha & bless ya true.... Neville

[gram linski]

but sometimes
goes absent
at the end
of pen, amen

[Neville]

You been there too.......... Amen :)

[Robert Trakofler]

I'll set her straight... where is she let me at her! Oh hello... yes master, um never-mind. Gulp, sorry Nev!

[Neville]

Cheers Robert... I forgive the both of ya.. always have and always will :)

[Eilis]

She likes to catch us unawares. Like at 3am when we have to be up at 5am to make it to an important appointment. The creative process is so mysterious. It does feel like someone is playing dice with my mind sometimes. Seeing if I'm ready for that poem that's floating through the ether.

Your author's note made me chuckle. Fun poem, N.

[Neville]

Darn right she does.. many's the time I have shot bolt upright in bed and started to punch the keys on my phone and type out the essence of some idea or other ... glad you saw the funny side to that note chuck..... and thanks for telling me:)

[Wondering Mind]

How very true!!
They have a mind of their own I always say.. like cats.

[Neville]

Absolutely.. bless you.. how very kind, Wandering Mind :)

[Lea Sheryn]

Ok, I'll leave my DNA behind with this comment, I like it because I like being amused.

[Neville]

Tis almost, but not exclusively a human thing... join the club my friend & thank you for checking in today... Neville

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome. I enjoyed it very much.

[Neville]

............. :)

[Chris Shaw]

The muse is a fickle creature Neville. Comes and goes when the mood takes her. Little we can do but wait until she is in better spirits.

And your authors note... I can safely say that I am not one who reads and leaves. My DNA all over your work.

Chris

[Neville]

She does indeed, she comes & goes at her own will.. And yes, I am indeed both honoured and
grateful to have custody of so much of your literary DNA Chris & I thank you for it..

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Neville and likewise consider your visits to my pages add considerable value.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, we should not try to force her, she will give on her own time.
you reminded me of a song here....

Maggie May...maybe we could call the muse that.

"i know i keep you amused, but i feel i'm being used"

j.

[Neville]

there is no point in trying is there.. thank you jacob sir .. and my, what a great track that is ...

N.

[Fay Slimm]

Clever write..............and amusingly true I might add.

[Neville]

thank you dear Fay and true.... N :)

[Einstein Noodle]

nice one Neville ... i especially like the attitude needed for the gifted pause ...she strikes when she will eh!? nice flow to this sir!
E.
ps. as to the author's note ... its crazy isn't it ... one can have hundreds of visits and no reviews ... i don't get it ... oh well .. so be it right!? :)

[Neville]

Ah' you noticed the purposeful pause... bless you man.. just recovering from our earlier session.. tis your round.. I think.. or is it.. :))))) :)

[Einstein Noodle]

since we don't know...together then .. down yer neck!

[Neville]

ha.... here we go again.. wot fun eh :)