Oh’ Dear You

Oh’ Dear You

 

Oh dear you

Silly thing

Too old to call

A silly girl

 

There is no

Need for

Etceteras  

Apologies or lies

 

You made

Your point

Now there

Is no point at all

 

So excuse

This show of

Letting go

No hate no love

 

No in-between

Tis time to go

No backward glance

Now truly gone 

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Great way to make that necessary break without a thrashing of anybody's behavior or character. Sometimes two people just ain't walkin' the same way & ya gotta let it go. I love your finality, which is needed in such partings. Some people want to hash & rehash in the name of "closure" . . . I've never known anyone who actually found it by thrashing around for a few more arguments! (((THUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Can't thank you enough for seeing it my way Margie (MUGS) fondly :) N

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh it is so good when you get to this point after a break-up. Some things are best left in the dust. Entertaining write, Neville:)

[Neville]

why thank you ma'am... thank you kindly..

[Fay Slimm]

The best way of dealing with goodbye is "no hate no love" and "no backward glance" you pen it so well here Nev..................... Fay

[Neville]

Thanking you Fay... and truly..

[Lydia Shutter]

When it's over, it's over.....and there is nothing left to say or do. I liked "no need for etceteras"....that says it all. No need to beat a dead horse so to speak. Good one, Neville. Lydi**

[Neville]

thank you kindly dear Lydi**...... N :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

No in between, sometimes that last word can be costly.
Excellent poem my friend.

[Neville]

why thank you from top to bottom my friend... and truly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

he's leaving home...bye bye....as McCartney would sing....
no looking back...maybe a memory's glance or two...
but we stay or go...no standing in the doorway of indecision.
j.

[Neville]

too true.... thanking you jacob for your insight and intuition...

N.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

This is so very good, nicely written and light.

[Neville]

Bless you my dear Kesch...