The End of the World

sometimes ya just gotta larf don't ya

The End of the World 

There were those who

Said

It would be

The end of the world

If she 

Puckered her lips and

Pointed to the sky 

But when she blew him

A kiss

It was only then they

Realised

Apuckerlips was nigh ... 

 

Author's Note

no note for reviewers

Reviews

[Beccy]

Well if we didn't laugh, we'd probably cry. Provided we had time in between building an ark, washing our hands every five minutes, emptying the shops of loo roll and hand cleaner; Oh and not to mention swatting at that plague of locusts currently decimating huge swathes of Africa and threatening the livelihood and lives of millions of people, but isn't getting much in the way of front page news.

Beccy.

[Neville]

Thanks for stopping by on ya way to the ……………..( ) fill in the space and let's make it really personal... Good to hear from you Beccy.. yep we gotta laugh, because the only other alternative is to ….. ( ) It seems to me that people get very very silly at the drop of a hat.. Was gonna say these days but guess it has always been the same.... Stay safe n well the pair of you.....

Neville :)

[Moonie]

It was witty how you subverted the reader's expectations of a poem about the apocalypse, and then dropped that pun! Good writing!
:))

[Neville]

How very kind, thank you MFD..

[H.E Watson]

Whitty and funny, brought a smile to my face!

[Neville]

Why thank thee kindly H.E Watson & bigly too … Stay safe out there my friend..

Neville :)

[andrew mitchell]

clever and witty as ever. lol

[Neville]

too kind sir, cheers Andrew...

[andrew mitchell]

You are very good Neville and the likes on your works prove it! Well done the maestro of poetry.

[Neville]

How very absolutely bloomin kind Andrew... stay safe n well :)

[Rania M]

Apocalypse? I love this play on words! Wish I could do it. Awesome in a word.

[Neville]

you are far too kind my friend, but I aint complaining :)

[Rania M]

I’m so happy then 😊

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

So then give it a try.....🌹🌹🌹

[Neville]

I might just give it a try, he said.... Cheers Kelly,

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Ha ha - - Brill write...... just what I needed today................ x Fay

[Neville]

Thanks Fay I guess we could all do with a chuckle write now eh'....

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Only you Nev!!!!! only you! :P

[Neville]

the world is a much safer place with only the one of us... maybe.. Oh' and thank you my Queen

[emmajoy]

Laughing.. you do that: clever, witty and more than typically Pettittism. Would make the first of a wonderful series.

[Neville]

You are indeed most kind, thank you emmajoy

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Such a play on words Neville, brought a wide smile to my face. Good morning. Have a great day.

Chris

[Neville]

are you a kiddin he asks... no, arm a geddon she replied.
Cheers,

Neville