The End of the World

The End of the World

A Poem by Neville
"

sometimes ya just gotta larf don't ya

"

The End of the World 

There were those who

Said

It would be

The end of the world

If she 

Puckered her lips and

Pointed to the sky 

But when she blew him

A kiss

It was only then they

Realised

Apuckerlips was nigh ... 


 

© 2020 Neville


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Well if we didn't laugh, we'd probably cry. Provided we had time in between building an ark, washing our hands every five minutes, emptying the shops of loo roll and hand cleaner; Oh and not to mention swatting at that plague of locusts currently decimating huge swathes of Africa and threatening the livelihood and lives of millions of people, but isn't getting much in the way of front page news.

Beccy.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


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It was witty how you subverted the reader's expectations of a poem about the apocalypse, and then dropped that pun! Good writing!
:))

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Neville

1 Month Ago


How very kind, thank you MFD..
Whitty and funny, brought a smile to my face!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago

Why thank thee kindly H.E Watson & bigly too … Stay safe out there my friend..

Nevi.. read more
clever and witty as ever. lol

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Neville

2 Months Ago


too kind sir, cheers Andrew...
andrew mitchell

2 Months Ago

You are very good Neville and the likes on your works prove it! Well done the maestro of poetry.
Neville

2 Months Ago


How very absolutely bloomin kind Andrew... stay safe n well :)
Apocalypse? I love this play on words! Wish I could do it. Awesome in a word.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


you are far too kind my friend, but I aint complaining :)
Rania

2 Months Ago

I’m so happy then 😊
So then give it a try.....🌹🌹🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago

I might just give it a try, he said.... Cheers Kelly,

Neville
Ha ha - - Brill write...... just what I needed today................ x Fay

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


Thanks Fay I guess we could all do with a chuckle write now eh'....
Well if we didn't laugh, we'd probably cry. Provided we had time in between building an ark, washing our hands every five minutes, emptying the shops of loo roll and hand cleaner; Oh and not to mention swatting at that plague of locusts currently decimating huge swathes of Africa and threatening the livelihood and lives of millions of people, but isn't getting much in the way of front page news.

Beccy.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


Thanks for stopping by on ya way to the ……………..( ) fill in the spa.. read more
Only you Nev!!!!! only you! :P

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


the world is a much safer place with only the one of us... maybe.. Oh' and thank you my Quee.. read more
Laughing.. you do that: clever, witty and more than typically Pettittism. Would make the first of a wonderful series.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Neville

2 Months Ago


You are indeed most kind, thank you emmajoy

Neville
Such a play on words Neville, brought a wide smile to my face. Good morning. Have a great day.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


are you a kiddin he asks... no, arm a geddon she replied.
Cheers,

Nevi.. read more

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