Banished

Banished

A Poem by Neville

Banished

 

Dear lord,


it feels as though


I might as well not be here at all ..


indeed,


that is precisely how it seems


Ever since


they did elevate the art of breaking up


and it became a science ..


Well here I am,


a very simple man


A mediocre novice, sincerely banished …



 

 

© 2021 Neville


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You speak to the choir my friend. This generation is vastly different then from the era I was born into. I mean really different. Trolling is considered a virtue. Who would have thought being a complete child and all around A-hole could be seen as a virtuous thing. The attention span of a child these days is non existent and they don't even give them pills for it anymore. Instead they get a smart phone or tablet and told told to enjoy the simple life. What has become of us? To this new generation we are banished from being a part of its future. Though at times I can understand considering how much we have screwed up the world and given it nothing but hate and indifference. But there is some good in some of us, ok maybe a small fraction, but still. I feel I still got some value despite them thinking I'm mediocre. I will not go into that Goodnight without kicking and screaming. And as long as I have breath I'm going to do as the Clash said...Rock the Casbah. And I'm gonna do it hard just to piss them off more. Thank you for sharing your art, my friend. We got some rocking to do.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Cheers Carlos..



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You speak to the choir my friend. This generation is vastly different then from the era I was born into. I mean really different. Trolling is considered a virtue. Who would have thought being a complete child and all around A-hole could be seen as a virtuous thing. The attention span of a child these days is non existent and they don't even give them pills for it anymore. Instead they get a smart phone or tablet and told told to enjoy the simple life. What has become of us? To this new generation we are banished from being a part of its future. Though at times I can understand considering how much we have screwed up the world and given it nothing but hate and indifference. But there is some good in some of us, ok maybe a small fraction, but still. I feel I still got some value despite them thinking I'm mediocre. I will not go into that Goodnight without kicking and screaming. And as long as I have breath I'm going to do as the Clash said...Rock the Casbah. And I'm gonna do it hard just to piss them off more. Thank you for sharing your art, my friend. We got some rocking to do.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Cheers Carlos..

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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