Before it Hurts Too Much to See

Before it Hurts Too Much to See

 

Before it hurts too much to see, dear lord

let me gaze upon slow

and sketch both her likeness and silhouette

just one more time

and then, I can go blind, more than willingly ..

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Poignant words here Neville. Almost a desperation to them. One last time when you fear there isn't any hope for the future means a great deal. Very prayer like to me. Hope sincerely your prayers are answered.

Chris

[Neville]

I guess the important thing is, I keep practicing them regardless Chris .. when I give up doing that, they will have been answered maybe :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes Neville. I may had done this prayer a few time. Just one more kiss, just one more time with a sweet gal. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like.
Coyote

[Neville]

when ya back is up against the wall, one more of anything would probably not go amiss .. thank you so much Coyote for this very generous review note :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.