Just for us Lemons

Just for us Lemons

A Poem by Neville

Just for us Lemons

 



when I fell for you


I fell gently ..


the trick is, to learn


from those


inevitable mistakes


we make


along the way ..


and then


to move on stronger


whilst avoiding


bitterness at any cost


since that


is just for us lemons ..



 

© 2022 Neville


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Sour grapes and bitterness just eat you up. Keep off the lemons I say unless you are eating fish and then a slice of lemon or lime can actually work well on the taste buds. Never had you down as a lemon :) A nice little warning to others here N.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


sound advice & very astute too .. what more could we lemons possibly wish for .. cheers our .. read more



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Maybe those lemons just haven’t been taught how to be gentle? Mix a little sugar and water and you have a refreshing and satisfying drink of lemonade. Move on stronger with a gift of the lemonade. Nice read. Temp

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


thank you dear Temp .. I can assure you I am no longer bitter and am a whole lot stronger an.. read more
Temperance

1 Year Ago

You’re welcome. T.
Sour grapes and bitterness just eat you up. Keep off the lemons I say unless you are eating fish and then a slice of lemon or lime can actually work well on the taste buds. Never had you down as a lemon :) A nice little warning to others here N.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


sound advice & very astute too .. what more could we lemons possibly wish for .. cheers our .. read more
Ingenius! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


a slight exaggeration methinks kind sir, but seriously kind and very much appreciated none t.. read more
Red Brick Keshner

2 Years Ago

well, for lemons it has to be ingenious, :-) the limes don't mind, either

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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