What the Drunken Farmer Said

What the Drunken Farmer Said

A Poem by Neville

What the Drunken Farmer Said

 


Can you hear her, directly overhead

she sounds just like an angel singing ..

 


But it is just a skylark son, or so the

bloomin drunken farmer said ..

 


Can you see her, directly overhead

such a tiny speck up small and high ..

 


She looks just like a floater surfing

across the surface of an eye ..

 


But no, it’s just a bloomin skylark son

or so the drunken farmer said ..

© 2022 Neville


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I enjoy your clever storytelling ability. It truly is a skill and one I admire. I imagine reading this from an old book of poems sitting on a dusty shelf. Great writing Neville.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


you are way too kind my friend & I am delighted .. Neville :)
"Just a bloomin skylark" has to come from a blind drunk who cannot find magic in the poetic song of an overhead angel and describe it to perfection as indeed you just did mon ami.............x

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I heard one yesterday & the day before .. it took me back yonks so it did ............. xread more

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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