No Looking Back Again

No Looking Back Again

 

Looking back like that

over her

shoulder, the way

that she

always did, with those

far away

eyes of hers, like flashing

blue lights

tho’ somehow demurely

at our

old here and there’s ..

Yes there,

where we once shared

discreet,

all too brief moments

with my

breath on those lips

of hers

cold, dark and lingering

like some

tasteful, eternal eclipse ..

Back then,

I clearly remember, 

I had no

expectations whatsoever 

and never 

felt quite that way before ..

  

Reviews

[lightsong]

This is almost perfect to read after your "moment of poetry" they are on the same page with one a happy one and the other is sad. "tasteful, eternal eclipse" that is one brilliant expression dear Neville, can't be escaped even if the taste is dull and empty. "no expectations" again, a line that caught my eyes.
no expectations doesn't mean a bad thing, it means that You let it flow as it should be... free. You write with details, and I like a man who pays attention to details :>

[Neville]

and I could not possibly ask for a more uplifting, blush making and welcome response to any one of my scribbles dear friend ..... my sincere thank you hardly seems an adequate response .. Neville :)

[Chris Shaw]

This is a beautiful poem though I detect it has a dark side. An eclipse blocks out the sun. And those lips, cold, dark and lingering make me feel of overs rather than beginnings.

Chris

[Neville]

thanking you has become quite the reflex our Chris .. thank you :)

[Writergurl]

This is beautiful, yet emotional.. wonderful write here

[Neville]

how extraordinarily kind of you writergurl .. thank you so very much ... Neville