Premature Evacuation

all this new-fangled predictive sexting aint funny .. you just couldn't make it up could ya :)

Premature Evacuation

 

She yelled get out

I hate you

don’t ever come

near me again ..

But then

even before those

words had

begun to register

and the onset

of regret

to hit home ..

He had slipped away

and he left her

with an

intense feeling of

premature evacuation ..

 

Author's Note

well maybe Lorry could :)

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

What a difference a couple of letters make. Yes, I had to look at the title twice. Strong words for a she to yell out before she had her second thoughts. That predictive text is a pain in the backside. You know I smiled at this and I don't know whether I should have.

Chris

[Neville]

I got a feeling there was more to this than meets the eye Chris ......... Neville :)

[Chris Shaw]

I've read it again, several times and I'm inclined to agree :)