Arc

Arc

A Poem by Neville
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Arc


 

the gentlest arc ..

   

the most subtle of curves ..

   

  that portion of air displaced by her smile ..

 

 

© 2024 Neville


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That portion of air displaced by her smile

Make me think she left you breathless with a simple smile but smiles sometimes aren’t simple are they especially if you notice the gleam or shine in the eyes that accompany it.

Great thought and idea conveyed in a few short lines.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


Ah' that feels so much better .. Thank you PB :)
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

You are welcome. It was an interesting and creative way to talk about the affect of a smile



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That portion of air displaced by her smile

Make me think she left you breathless with a simple smile but smiles sometimes aren’t simple are they especially if you notice the gleam or shine in the eyes that accompany it.

Great thought and idea conveyed in a few short lines.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


Ah' that feels so much better .. Thank you PB :)
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

You are welcome. It was an interesting and creative way to talk about the affect of a smile
Simple, direct, wistful, and powerful. Nicely done, Nev

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


How very kind. Bless you John very muchly appreciated me old mucka .. Neville
John Sullivan

1 Month Ago

"Me old mucka?" D****t Nev, speak English :P

You and Emma with the King's...
He(YJ) has been with many, you are one, i am one and he is the one for me. My last one. all together made his life. if i dedicate its gonna hurt, nothing sorry i also dont want to say. I just want to be with him, and we both leave together. A handsom man, (of your mom's and sister's found match), and your dad are waiting for you to get married to the handsom man.

-jessy jacob
a purple heart
no hurts.


Posted 1 Month Ago


very creative and beautiful..."that portion of air" the subtle arc... so romantic... love it!
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


what more could an old fella want .. many warm thanks back at you Betty .. Neville
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

You're very welcome!!
Warmly, B
Absolutely beautiful. A gentle smile, and that air displaced is genius. Only you could have thought of that detail. Have a glorious weekend Neville.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


Besides the blush, you got me smiling all over .. thank you so much our Chris .. Neville :)<.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Month Ago

…….………. …😘

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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