Forsaken

Forsaken

 

I swear they once moved like

cats

   and each was then golden ..

But

   only one of them purred ..

Oh’ my

very dearest and precious

   of loves ..

   

Where are you now and why ..

I need you

far more than my chest needs

to rise

and to fall again with each

breath

   

and the thrust of a new season

   without you

..

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Blimey, you’ve been abandoned by a cat who was a contortionist (they all are) and you need her more than breath itself. Dear Neville that malt on top of the grape and grain certainly fires up the yearning. An intense piece of longing:)

Chris

[Neville]

You got it in one Chris .. thank you .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

Starting over and beginning again without the person who captures your heart and energizes you soul is miserable and overwhelming at best.

Think I shall use the above portion I just stated in a poem lol

[Neville]

and why not .. but in the meantime, many thank you's PB .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

We shall see. If I have time to write today

[Neville]

................. 😎👍

[Poetic Beauty]

I started a poem last night but it’s two ideas in one and I have to separate it lol 😝

[Neville]

................... Good luck 😊👍

[A Poor Player]

Very evocative. I love the line 'and the thrust of a new season without you'. Beautifully done.

[Neville]

How extraordinarily kind my friend, bless you. All Good Things, Neville