Impressions of A Senryu

Impressions of A Senryu

 

either I am now

invisible, or indeed,

   

   they have all gone blind ..

 

Reviews

[John Sullivan]

Right after I read this I read fellow Cafe-er Green's "Projection" and think it may be a fine companion piece to this one. The capacity for others to project their own failings onto others is something I see daily from people fairly close to me, unfortunately. The sort of people for whom everyone else is the problem, never themselves. Now hopefully, I'm not falling into that trap myself in my personal life, but that's a whole other conversation. Anyways, I digress. A bang-up job with a form I've got no talent for. Thought-provoking indeed (in a good way)

[Neville]

I shall have to go look into that, so thanks for the pointer John .. I am also most grateful for your thoughts on my little scribble in general .. Cheers sir .. Neville

[John Sullivan]

Back atcha, Nev

[Chris Shaw]

You are neither blind nor invisible going by the number of reads this senryu has already had so early in the day. Be sure you’ll get more Neville. I found John!s comment interesting to read. I do like this form of brevity. It can say so much.

Chris

[Neville]

Thanks for noticing Chris .. indeed, thank you both. Neville