Why

Why

A Poem by Nianque
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Rhyming

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Why do you like me so much?

I’m imperfect as they come

One more mistake

I’ll come undone

 

Teasing and cheating and releasing

That’s all I ever do

Yet you continue to love me

Through and Through

 

I’m not an Angel

But not a Devil

Yet you chase

After me as if I am a queen

Don’t you see that I’m stuck in between?

 

Pleasing and leaving and deceiving

That what I do to you

My warmth and affection

You aren’t receiving

 

Please get a clue

I’m just not into you

 

 

 

© 2010 Nianque


Author's Note

Nianque
This is sort of terrible writing but i wanted to try end rhyming just once :

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is this about me? THAT MAKES IT A GREAT WRITE! seriously... i think it's about me, but I'm self centered anyways!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well that explains a lot ! Thanks for the review !! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Some people need a hit on the head to understand they are not wanted. I like the poem. The woman who give men the hardest time are the one's we want the most. Nothing easy is worth a fight. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I enjoy reading, drawing, and acting silly. I love my kitties, fishies, and turtle :] . I enjoy challenging myself and think. I've recently began to write again. It feels heavenly. more..

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