Mr. Invincible

Mr. Invincible

A Poem by human-blender
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This was for my close cousin whom i was very close with who past on

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Mr. Invincible

The shed of light will reap upon his soul

He was the king and always shall be

The pain of him leaving is indescribable

His presence is by  my side for he is my guardian angel

 

© 2011 human-blender


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I adore the simplicity of this poem. Sometimes more is not the way to go. Though, for future poems, you might want to use a different text. I do like this one and I feel like it fits the poem well but its a little blurry in reading. It's possibly that it might just be my computer screen though.
Anyway, keep writing. I will be sure to read more ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it

Posted 12 Years Ago



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