Please Vomit the Milky River of Forgetting

How do I know you?

 

One blade of grass

     among countless edges

     and frontiers of remembering

 

Under bare feet

Consciousness is defined

 

"How do I love thee"

Because I know you

     and many times before

     you let me f**k you

     and we spoke of Eternal Knowing and revolution

Of intersecting pasts and presents

 

I know you in all ways

     and always

 

And I forget again

Please forgive me

 

 

[This is for public viewing, though not to be of profit to anyone but myself.]

Reviews

[Legacy]

Nick Granger,

I read through ALOT of your works... and noticed some had been on this site since 2009 without a review one.

After reading this one, much more casual than all the rest, it dawned on me that you have no reviews on many of your writes because most can not comprehend your meaning. I know you have put together a puzzle of thoughts for some to figure out, and some do not desire to figure out puzzles when reading. *(knowing from my writes, dictionaries are occasionally required)*

That being said, your write here is a wonder of muses and amusements. I can not likely point out my favorite line in this write, due most are my favorite. I enjoyed this poem, as I have enjoyed the most of your poems, thus far. I just need to read them several more times to review them accurately.

I am thinking you should place this in Poetic Infusion Society's contests, I just can not pin point which would be fitting for this piece fits them all. (When submitting, maybe use a different word for f***?, other than that NO OTHER changes)

Please enter! I would be honored to see you there.

Have a wonderful day,

Legacy