Another World

This life has shown me

A distant world beyond my

Reach. Is it out there?

Author's Note

Is this a good haiku? O.o"

Reviews

[VERONICA]

I'm no judge on Haiku's. I did love how "Reach." was on the next line. It was very effective in conveying that struggle to grasp the world. The rhythm is great! But I can't say I particularly like the "Why can't I see?" it seems too vague and is unsatisfying.