The First Kiss

What a soft, blissful

Touch!..Feeling like a burning fire

That feels like a cloud.

Reviews

[Helena]

I still remember my first kiss, and yes I can relate! Very sweet!
Thank you for submitting this to my Valentine's contest! ~ Helena

[Elvina CZq]

The feel of first kiss indeed... short and sweet :) The font you used has added the spice to through these lines! :)

[Akaila]

short and straight to the point! thats how i like it:) this was cute:)

[crashandburnplz]

I like this, but I get the feeling this is only a part of an amazing poem.

So if you decide to add to this, pleasepleaseplease tell me. :]
I'd love to see the outcome.

[poetic soul]

wow!! nice description...both of the kiss and of the first time kissed "feeling".......

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[allonsy_doctor]

I liked how it was a bunch of random words that have to do with "kissing someone"... It was really creative!!