These People

These People

A Poem by NightsShade
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Invasion.

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I know these people and what they do.

I know these people, each of their intentions, what's true.

 

I see these people, I know them inside out.

I see these people, the expressions on their faces, the things their all about.

 

I feel these people, crowding around what I feel is mine.

I feel these people, stealing and using, everything is falling in line.

 

I hear these people and the things they say, things no one wants hear.

I hear these people and what they say is far from sincere.

 

I cry for these people, the torture, seduction and pain.

I cry for these people, but try as I might, everything is done in vain.

 

Invasion,

Onslaught,

Deceitful

Frauds,

Mongrels!

 

© 2010 NightsShade


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NightsShade
I usually don't write things this short but enjoy.

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its good...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I really like the feeling of this, very rythmic, goes together quiet well I think. I relate to some of it very well too. ...I definately like this one(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


What an insightful, powerful, poignant write! You capture glimpses of lives and life through vivid imagery. Amazing words!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short but impressionable. I like how you use senses to describe how you experience the "people". A few spelling errors but that's okay. And I'm glad you decided not to leave WC.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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