Love vibes

Love vibes and old wounds

The love vibes from you I did never receive;
All i wanted is my heart to be free;
The secret in my heart remains unrevealed;
Some old woundings i didn't wanted to be seen;
Those ugly scars and shackles of pain never let me free....

-N Sodhi-

Reviews

[Peter Rogerson]

A word of help. The word secrete means to ooze or leak a fluid. I believe you meant secret. Also, on the last line I suspect you meant shackles.
It is a very pleasing short poem.

[N Sodhi]

Thanks for ur correction.. 😊