Swallow

Contains Mature Subject Matter

Relieve me this lust.
Sin with me, sweet one.
Gaze at me.
And in me, place trust.
Fall to your knees.
Service my whims.
Sate the thirst which takes
you to the corridors of shame.
Drink the taste of depravity.
Swallow the darkness of my seed.
Taste the salt of demons and goddesses.
Savor the nuances.
Rise from your knees.
Lie in the daybed.
Rest.
For the night has yet fallen.
You will be used again.
And you will beg for release.
Release from my grip.
Begging for breath.
And you will crave the darkness within me.

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh my!! Well let me get past my visceral reaction first to comment on the exquisitely divine writing in this! My jaw just dropped at the cleverly used words and lines that punched.. (jaw dropping.. yes, I think I will use that pun for your swallow poem!)

The first line just tugged me in helplessly.. I was like, "okay...." oh how we've all longed for someone to relieve us of our lusts. It's an urgent need, and that clearly leaps off the screen here!! Wow! Such clever writing, so enticing!

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Okay.. so clearly I was still stunned by your brilliance. How many times can I say "clever" in my review?!

[Nipplegrinder]

I dunno. Several?

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Yeah.. I re-read that and thought... maybe I should come up with a different descriptor.. sorry!

[Nipplegrinder]

You're all good.