So I Hear Poems Are Pretty Popular

Well I'm about to get in on that pie.

Touchy feely all around

Making funny poems is tough

Ooh ah, ooh ah

Don't you got some different stuff?

 

All I got is gushy poems

I'd hate to go politico

Get'n moody, maybe mellow

I'm typing all this on the go

 

A B A B

Screw that noise, lets get funky

 

Ooh ah, ooh ah,

I anna wanna peea,

 

All I got is cheesy rhymes

Wait, I've yet to post a thing

Nothing here but cliche jive

I'm making this up on the fly

 

Look'n round, what do I see

Top novels, romantic fantasy

Never been another Tolkien

Since the late 1940's

 

Ooh ah, now I did it

Gone down a dark dank pit

 

Sha na na na, banana

Ain't gettn paid for this

Ooh ah, ooh ah ah

I swear that ain't a diss

 

Man, I dont know what's going on

I guess I'll sing a silly song

 

 

Author's Note

lolwut

Reviews

[Faith Almazan]

I really enjoyed the playful language that you used and the different onomatopoeias that you used. As well as the rhythm of it is really good.

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Awesome lol, I laughed and I found it to be really awesome:)

[Nitoh S]

thank ya sir

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Your very welcome:)))))))))))))

[An Ordinary Woman]

you got spunk
you got flow
you got poetry
bravado!

Very nice writing! I enjoyed!

[Nitoh S]

muchos grassy