Love Boats

Love Boats

 

In fact many of us can be so cold

And few who are made of gold

However I can tell the bitter story

Of those sad people’s fake  glory

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It’s not fair how they chase our love

When They only look after impression

Its not fair when they break our links

And when they announce their aggression

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It’s when the brave great lovers are

Struggling for their beloved ones sake

And the magic of the ink and paper

Makes what they could never  make

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Its the great battle cry that we need

To destroy those loosers indeed

Those double faced people that we know

Should really get their hopes low

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Because The cold ice will fade when the sun

Is in the sky of the gold-hearted gentleman

And now i can see my girl in my arms

Carrying me to that deep kisses ocean...

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On that ocean where there’s no air

Oh baby ! that warm deep breath Filling our throats..

Simply we cant be killed by despair

We’ll keep kissing forever and then we’re safe on love boats..

 

Reviews

[softlyfall]

Beginning a poem with a non sequitur is the oddest thing. Then the second line is an incomplete sentence. The THIRD line is a non sequitur too
then I gave up