In This Act I Am Alive

How I describe the feeling of writing.

the thing about writing, for me anyway...

is that i can feel each letter being pulled from my being.

and in this act i feel alive.

               like when you ride a bicycle down a steep hill

sometimes it's short lived...

                      sometimes i have time to really think about it

while
it's happening

                        
     and i feel the wind in my hair,
                 and realize...

                              that isn't wind....
                   it's the sensation of myself,
 moving through the air.

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The dictionary describes a moral, as a message conveyed or a lesson to be learned, from a story or event. This piece certainly emphasises lateral thinking; viewing one event, through different perspectives.

An excellent example of creative writing. Well done!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[Jenny Davis]

Wonderful piece! My God you summed up life and writing in such few words, I absolutely loved this.....REALLY excellent stuff ;)

[Pema Dorje]

oh beautiful... I love riding my bike down the hill and your percept is right on!!!

[Matthew Cremeans]

Everyone on the cafe should read this! it really expresses the feeling that you get when you write! thank you so much for posting this.

[Emily B]

Breath-taking. Amazing. I never thought about it this way, but so utterly true. In this act I am alive. . . wow!

[ForgottenSoldier]

I love the type of writing you did its everywhere and it kept my eyes moving great job and the peom itself is amazing i loved this one all around ^^