my issue

I've forgotten tomorrow
Before the sun rises
Trapped in yesterday
As the sun sets

Living for today
In the moment

Walking with my eyes closed
The upcoming moments, years
Are unlikely

Reviews

[whatamafu]

I know that feel. I think this is a good depiction on how we can get hung up on life. Our mistakes of the past, or even just decisions right or wrong. Living in the past can never take us into the future. "Forgotten tomorrow before the sun rises." Isn't that the truth? We miss what is right in head of us because our eyes are behind us, or, "waling with my eyes closed" Good poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A short poem with a lot of questions. Tomorrow is a unknown journey for the most of us. The poem had a dark edge to it. I like the short sentences and the hidden meaning in the words. A very good closure to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rene Salinas]

Great read and fun as well. The temporal dillema and so used are we to the confines of time that when one decides to change even on a semantical note. We feel displaced into something that is illogical.
Oh past- of forward times, present rewind and future stand -by.

Very clever Noel.

Thankyou

[Blogger]

This is unique and inventive. Nice job!

[Wórdsmíth]

Every painful soul passes through such boom periods of life but with the time, everything becomes good but yeah.. in present and in future nothing can become again as good as it`s been in past because sometimes, some memories are meant to be captured with the time which can`t be vanished from the frame of mind. Nice theme!