Do I like you?

Do I like you? �" I do not know

In the cosmos of my heart…

There is always open window;

There are no rotten shadows;

There is plenty room … for love!!!!

Do I like you? �" I won’t tell you!

Read between my trembling lips,

See in rainbow reflections,

Feel in icy-sparkling kiss…

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

It is very good, but, if i can impart some thought.. eliminate the punctuation.. all of it, and find a way to emphasize exactly what you are trying to say.. so that there is no need to add punctuation, use your thoughts and words (don't be afraid to swear or be harsh) you have something important to say here, and i think the readers aren't getting the whole picture.

[Who Cares]

I love the last line. You are exremely talented, it was short and simple yet powerful and written well. I look foreward to reading more of your work

[James Paulin]

Sincerity, innocence, open to true love with exuberance. I enjoyed this.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

the rainbow reflections .............. oh...beautifully written. Your open mind poem has butterfly like swing in our heart. A good poem with simple and beautiful wordings. This tiny lines having great relief to mind.

[Eagle Cruagh]

In the cosmos of your heart there is
always an open window.
That is a beautiful expression, verbally
and literally . I would like to see more
writing by you.
---- John

[Jami Nicole]

I hate having this feeling. It's a good piece. Keep it up. :)

[Revery]

Interesting Nona. I like the possibility of it all.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

This is very good, I like it very much. It sounds like you are open to the wonder beyond traditional attachments.

It's as if you are playing 'coy' with your lover since you enjoy the chase.

P.S. I know the whispers of Akhmatova when I see them. I approve this aesthetic triumph for popular circulation.