peacefull night

peacefull night

A Poem by CoraZanini
"

I was standing on my window yesterday night

"

Clear mind,clean head

for that one silent moment 

instead of being surrounded by shallow minds

who just keep searching for their perfect lie


one dark night cigarette in hand

silent view of the one

who shed

the tears at night but now instead only clean mind and clean head

© 2013 CoraZanini


Author's Note

CoraZanini
honestly it just popped out of my mind so be gentle

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Not a bad piece you penned err typed here. Very good. Can't function without the mind being clear to relax and to think clearly and rationally.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


I think it's true that people do search "for the perfect lie". I like the way you formatted this poem, with effective use of repetition of phrases to keep the focus. Nice writing and I enjoyed the read :) Justine

Posted 6 Years Ago


CoraZanini

6 Years Ago

thank you justine,i appreciate it!
We need those peaceful moments...Thank you for sharing...:)....................

Posted 6 Years Ago


CoraZanini

6 Years Ago

we do indeed!
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).................
Solace in silence, bliss in being completely alone. Our heads are our refuge from a kicking, screaming world, and sometimes we need to retreat in order to resupply our sanity and rebuild our defenses before facing the onslaught of reality. I really enjoyed the line "shallow minds who just keep searching for their perfect lie". So many people search for one unequivocal answer to their lives, when they should instead be looking inside themselves for meaning. Great poem! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


CoraZanini

6 Years Ago

thank you,i appreciate!
Indeed it's a peaceful moment to be alone sometimes. The thought is clearly stated here. Nice job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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