Downturn

Downturn

A Poem by Noor
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Wrote this poem after having my first argument with my partner…

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The leaves fell,
I had a lot to tell.
A man I had in mind,
his promises blind.
Expectations exploded,
tears were loaded.
Silence took over,
feeling drunk but sober.
Hurts me again,
smiles in pain.
It was a downturn,
a return.

© 2022 Noor


Author's Note

Noor
Any constructive feedback is much appreciated, since English is not my native language ☺️

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Added on September 25, 2022
Last Updated on September 25, 2022
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Noor
Noor

Stockholm , Sweden



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