Peace

This is a joking Lanturne, lol. However I find it is true.

Some

Say that

Peace is real

I say it takes

Skill

Author's Note

Review this and my other work too, please? =D

Reviews

[Circe]

a thinking poem, this is a great message and very well expressed in this structure.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you. Only after I made it I realized it was much like Bruce Lee's quote on patience being an accumulated strength, and not a characteristic, per se. So then peace too, takes skill and knowledge of, to truly practice and understand.

[Circe]

oh I didn't know of Bruce Lee's quote, this is different though, to me it's more than belief, it's an art that requires finesse and practice

[ObscurityNone]

Indeed.

[Kaya]

To be dreadfully honest, I detest short poems. This one though, was so sweet, and so elegant, something not generally seen in short poems. I loved it.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, Kaya. I am glad you can enjoy that which you detest! ^_^

[Kaya]

Its very frustrating for me. You definitely have a lot of skill as a writer.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, that really means a lot. =)

[Falling Leaf.]

Some would say it's simple. I'll say that's only the first impression. You've packed a great message into a very small piece, something few can do. Superb.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, Savannah. Your spoiling me, but it's making me mushy, so kudos. xD

[Falling Leaf.]

Ha. A much deserved spoiling, then :)

[ObscurityNone]

Just realized that the third line actually has four syllables! >_