Bound & Laced

Tie, lit

Ling Ling

Linger

Jah Jah

Jahnella

Yeahhh

What is up?

Ceiling, again, you say?

Remember when this

Miss when that

Hah!

I recall that one day you…

And the way you would sound

When….

The Emo-tion behind our

Hearts

Now two

I never did like the number

Hang onto my shoulders

No reason not to

Everyone else does

Give me sex

Give me affection

How infectious it is

When you….

Yeah

You did it, we live

Them

They’re okay

I suppose

Few more pieces

To our

Puzzle

Now hear this, little one

You don’t and sure say so

I smell it

Regret, all past, all place

And all…

Bound & laced

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

It's a bit more...broken than what I usually read from you. If someone had handed me this and told me that you wrote it I would not have believed them. Is it about a man who is getting married, and is not ready for the commitment? I'm puzzled. It's an alright piece, though. Nice work, my friend.

[ObscurityNone]

Thanks, It's something I mainly just threw together on the spot, a mix-up of various feelings, situations, and frankly, lines that came to mind that I just wanted to jot down. Thank you though.

[Falling Leaf.]

No trouble at all :)

[River Page]

Okay man. So to me, this totally seems like a conversation between a dude and his ex. Which is great and original and I like it. But the last few lines seem a bit out of place to me. But hey, an opinion is an opinion. Nice work.