Blood in Clot

Inspected suspection

Choke your inner desire

Claimed and designed

Reminded & lost in guidance

Calamity strikes the heart

Make the amend and in self, surrender

Tender to your touch, but cold as they come

Strong ironed will rusted between me

You and all that was thought to be truth

I lose, unbarred, explained and complacent

Adjacent to the discovery, your Love for me?

Your mind has gone far with the tricks you play

I’m not quite as dull as once noted

I smote all that you strived for

Your desires, they can go to hell

With whomever you are; and the rest of your façade.

Author's Note

Reviews

[ObscurityNone]

She remains, behind the window pale, from out of your write, prisoned in her own self-disgust, I loved this. You're writing a very psychological artwork here.
Into two lovers not mentioned to be together, but separated in eachothers loneliness.
Brilliant stuff.

- Elisa

[ObscurityNone]

Thanks, I really like how you explain it. x)

:)

[Dalia]

nice poem, well done