Up To Two

Hiss & damage report.

Fell up to the top and banged in again

Hold steals tight-knit glass ajar faking

To a knot

Wrecked in mind, and sold to find

The missing component

Bloated insecure and deluded

You and the comical delusions

Spring forth, in patchwork simile

Blind, blind to all above

Up

Top

Over-head and you muster the will

Ability's sake is as fruitless as

Desert your heart, with intent to

Stray from the pack, last thoughts

Final tracked, side-showed, and endowed

Is able, made to and meant to last

Think not to feel & I beg of you

Feel your thoughts and grant the

Need, the last bit of essential breath

Loaned, groaned, may & laid

Hide in lost chemicals of

Inconsequential reality, come out of me

Lust, trust, parallel results

Consult with yourselves

Which of you wins?

Wolf or wolf neither a difference

Without one or the other one could die

Though with two your crimes will be shown

Second, rested, and needed

Show one, and keep the other hidden.

Author's Note

Reviews

[ObscurityNone]

Your brains get beyond :D In this write as how many times I read each note, of the music you write, I felt it, but couldn't find the words to paint...
I feel very strongly you to consist of two halves, yourself and another piece, which for me is not entirely clear ... but it is somehow related to you. I find that very interesting I must say, It is about your inner self, but it can also lead to freedom, the soul of your soul, the place of mind, but also the need to escape. Maybe I'm totally wrong, but that is what your writes do, they let the reader interpret, and oversee, and ponder. I like it very much, you did a splendid job on this one, and the music is perfect. Thank you Hermanito.

- Elisita

[ObscurityNone]

Once again your words make me feel that which I simply cannot describe. I mixture of joy and extreme gratitude, I suppose? Thank you, Hermana. x)

You're most welcome, I hope I did understood you well.... :) x

[ObscurityNone]

I don't think the point is understanding me, but instead allowing what I wrote to take root, inside of you... Perhaps relate, and make something, whatever it might be, become aware and in turn, provoke joy and better oneself.

That is nicely worded, yes. That is what we are here for, to share thoughts, and surreal and fantastic fictional writes, in between true reality, or reality with a glimpse of what we leave of our ego's into a poem.... :) you just did a very good job on this one, and that is why I did saved it into my library. :)

[ObscurityNone]

I'm flattered.

[KP]

Thanks for your input on mine, yours is very well written too! Makes me feel like I have something to find.