[Metal Ravage]

Shorter than most of my poems.

Build up your dreams.
And break down reality.
It's a trap.
I hope you believe me.
I made mistakes,
don't follow my footsteps.
You don't want to know,
what I see.

Author's Note

Constructed critizim only.

Reviews

[Fabric Pulse]

Have I seen this before? Hmmm...WELL. I love the title, one of the first things I notice if I like it. :) Anyways, your inner message is to keep on believing in yourself despite negatives, and we all could use it sometimes. Let this poem serve as that constant reminder!

[The Cute 1]

i like this short but i like it it makes me think about the mistakes I've made and I've made alot