[Skeleton Scars]

About a breakup, or loosing trust with a friend. Enjoy!

Til the whole world hears,

we have no trust.

I'll proclaim it,

with a misifying gust.

~

You hate me anyways,

you shouldn't care.

But my broken heart,

Definatly won't be the thing,

that tears you apart.

~

It's your fault

I'm pulling blood from my skin.

I'm just following what I feel is right,

you can't judge my scars,

when you have your own within.

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[Spiral Panda]

"You can't judge my scars when you have your own within." The most powerful lines of your poem are in that truth. Never lose faith in it. Tell it out loud.