Ghost Town

The shortest poem ever. Well for me at least.

 

Blood laden voices

And tear ridden cries

Brake for silence

A sudden unnerving silence

The have laid down their swords

And fortified their shields

Emotions have no place in this ghost town.

 

Reviews

[Greystone]

As before, you're brilliant; however, on this one, you appear to have smudged your ink--The last line could use a little re-wording if it's to fit with the rest of the piece. (The superb, better-than-I-could-do-in-my-dreams piece...)