Haiku of madness

Haiku of madness

A Poem by AmandaTheOdd
"

I know no differences in madness or in sanity.

"
The worlds gone mad. 

I know no differences 
in madness or in sanity. 

I live on the fringe of madness itself 
So think before you tell me reality is your's.

© 2013 AmandaTheOdd


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AmandaTheOdd
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There are problems with your apostrophes. "Your's" is not correct, as you don't indicate possessives in a pronoun (I think, I might have made up that reason).
It should be "world's gone mad", as you are contracting "world has".

In terms of what this poem means, I think you need to say more on how madness and sanity are equivalent. That's a pretty big statement to make. And a scary one too.

Hope this helps!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AmandaTheOdd

11 Years Ago

It's a metaphor plus "The worlds gone mad' meaning it went mad already same as "'The world has gone .. read more



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There are problems with your apostrophes. "Your's" is not correct, as you don't indicate possessives in a pronoun (I think, I might have made up that reason).
It should be "world's gone mad", as you are contracting "world has".

In terms of what this poem means, I think you need to say more on how madness and sanity are equivalent. That's a pretty big statement to make. And a scary one too.

Hope this helps!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AmandaTheOdd

11 Years Ago

It's a metaphor plus "The worlds gone mad' meaning it went mad already same as "'The world has gone .. read more
i think the difference between madness and sanity is simply consensus. the majority perception is sanity. interesting poem. not sure why you use the word haiku to describe it though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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AmandaTheOdd
AmandaTheOdd

Bakersfield, CA



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I live with my cat Sassy [Nanny Pooh] Shelton in a small apartment,I'm dating a great man who I love dearly. My passions in life are poetry,blogging,running my forums,and being an activist for mental .. more..

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