You Deserve Even More

You Deserve Even More

A Poem by The Girl Who Loved Too Much

I wish I could say to you all of the things I want to say.
I wish I could tell you “I love you” five times a day.
I wish I could hold you and just be there.
I wish I could show you all the ways that I care.
I wish I could make you smile and laugh.
I wish I could give you everything that I have.
I wish you nothing but love and happiness.
I wish she knew you deserve even more than this.

© 2014 The Girl Who Loved Too Much


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It's simple and straight-forward . if this is your style, then well done. there is a lot of emotion floating , and I like that in poems.

thank you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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The Girl Who Loved Too Much

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate you leaving a comment and letting me know what you think.

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Added on January 16, 2014
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