That Girl

That Girl

A Poem by The Girl Who Loved Too Much

She's got a smile that makes you stare,

Eyes so gentle and kind,

Oh yes, she's quite beautiful,

But what fascinates me is her mind.

© 2014 The Girl Who Loved Too Much


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Wonderful simplicity. Sweet and beautiful. I love when a few lines can convey so much feeling.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Girl Who Loved Too Much

10 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Short and sweet. The mind is beautiful above all.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Girl Who Loved Too Much

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment. It truly is!!
This is so flawless.
I love the simplicity of it..
It makes it so much more beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Girl Who Loved Too Much

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate that.
Too often inner beauty is overlooked. I think sometimes it is more important than what is seen in the mirror. To find someone with both inner and outer beauty is to find a gem. Lovely little romantic write. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Girl Who Loved Too Much

10 Years Ago

I completely agree. Thank you for the comment!

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Added on January 17, 2014
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