Ultraviolet Horizon

31/10/12 I fear the future, though the choices I make every day decide it. This is recent and not great, I've been out of touch with my writing lately

Ultraviolet horizon you pain me,
With crystal wings that sedate my stomach,
And leave me nought but dripping affliction.
Beside penitence, of course, gracing me as you do like a sprite,
Like the winds that brush my coral cheeks



I should not abhorre your arrival though it does still linger
Like deaths putrid stench,
A compulsory obituary I crafted this morning.
Its fluorescence sometimes springs and leaps and hides,
Between small cracks of the walls I built
I thought them faithful to me - sound and secure!
I know them now, deceitful fiction.

Alas It is not they who decay but my recollection
Of springing and leaping, and hiding I supposed to be petite..
Little did I think no ghoul or man, ghost nor monster disturbs my dreams
But yesterdays me in a sheet

Author's Note

Bad grammar, probably bad spelling to!

Reviews

[Santiago Veracruz]

Some word groups don't make the right connections but you've got some good s**t here. Be only a bit more hard on yourself, and read. Helps me at least, thank you. Your title is super.

[Ohhhwillow]

Helpful criticism, thank you!