Hurting

My arm hurts From all these cuts My heart hurts From all these ruts I've felt like dying but How would it affect you? I ruined what friendship we had By telling you how I felt Now talking to you Always hurts more than ever Can I die now? I already told you how I felt My heart it torn into shreds And is always aching Wouldn't it be nice to be you? At least you don't hurt as much as I do But then again maybe you do But you hide it from everyone Why not rip my heart even more? It's already in pieces Don't freight over it anymore I'll just next time not tell you how I feel.

 

Author's Note

anything i should fix?

Reviews

[Leanne Conway]

I loved this one, It's well written. =)