Eternal

This is my first official work.

Like the pure In heart who's scared to sin,
I can stand for love with fear to lean,
Lay my anger aside just to be with thee,
As good medicines lead to a cure,
So has my tonic, your love, made me clean.

Author's Note

Guys, this is my first official work tho. What do you think of it.

Reviews

[Victor Warui]

I find this poem really endearing and the flow is magnificent until you made an abrupt end. If you added more details after the line "I can stand for love with fear to lean,
Lay my anger aside just to be with thee,"
This would make a very romantic poem. Otherwise, I've read your other poems, this is very captivating, world class Art.

[Oku cobham]

Thank you, I'm very excited it is appreciated. I'll be looking forward to making necessary changes. Thank you.