Rays

Rays

A Poem by OliviaTheElf
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ANOTHER poem from English class. I had 3 random words and 2 minuets to write a poem with them. Here's what I came up with.

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The shine through the windows,

Stained with Gods light,

The Sistine Chapel stands,

With all of its might...

 

The flashing of his heart,

Micheals tiresome expidition,

As he painted for the world,

A beautiful addition...

© 2011 OliviaTheElf


Author's Note

OliviaTheElf
I Love, love, LOVE the design and art of the Sistine Chapel. My 3 words were: Sistine chapel, shine, and flashing.

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Another great poem. :) Short and sweet... That's my style. :) The only error I saw was "Gods" instead of "God's."

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short intense poems are the best,
like yours, giving daily grind all the rest.

You summon what I want to find,
you foster my mind.

And not at least, you cry to me:
Just be, just be!

Posted 9 Years Ago


So beautifully written this is, very angelic and oozes positive imagery, excellent :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


very nice read, I really enjoyed it
Its short but very explainitory
Great piece!
~Amai

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 10 Years Ago



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