A scented candle

A scented candle

A Poem by Omikron
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When somebody leaves this earth, no matter how unimportant he or she was, one will always leave a trace of their soul and body on this earth.

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Imagine me as a scented candle
Oh, so magical
Oh, so pretty
Oh, how I'll light up your city

Imagine me as a scented candle
When you burn me
You free me
And my hidden scents embrace your soul throughly

Imagine me as a scented candle
Your spirits are eased
Your mind is released
And I am here for your service and please

Imagine me as a scented candle
When my wax is used
And my wick is abused
All that's left of me is the scent in you

© 2015 Omikron


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I really liked it. Full of deep meaning. This is my second time doing this, since my PC had an issue. I hope you like this.. I edited it for you. Not sure if you forgot some grammar.

Imagine me as a scented candle. Added Period
Oh, so magical. Added Period
Oh, so pretty. Added Period
Oh, how I'll light up your city. Added Period

Imagine me as a scented candle. Added Period
When you burn me, Added Comma
you free me. Added Period and Lower-Cased the "Y"
and my hidden scents embrace your soul thoroughly Fixed miss-spelled word and lower cased the "A"

Imagine me as a scented candle.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Omikron

6 Years Ago

Thanks. Sometimes I do overlook some grammar rules to create a dramatic feeling and give the poem mo.. read more
McBear

6 Years Ago

Ah, I see what you're saying. Hehe. Thank you!



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Wow beautiful piece with a deeper meaning. It tells an amazing yet sad story of the footprints we leave behind when we eventually disappear off the face of the earth

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked it. Full of deep meaning. This is my second time doing this, since my PC had an issue. I hope you like this.. I edited it for you. Not sure if you forgot some grammar.

Imagine me as a scented candle. Added Period
Oh, so magical. Added Period
Oh, so pretty. Added Period
Oh, how I'll light up your city. Added Period

Imagine me as a scented candle. Added Period
When you burn me, Added Comma
you free me. Added Period and Lower-Cased the "Y"
and my hidden scents embrace your soul thoroughly Fixed miss-spelled word and lower cased the "A"

Imagine me as a scented candle.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Omikron

6 Years Ago

Thanks. Sometimes I do overlook some grammar rules to create a dramatic feeling and give the poem mo.. read more
McBear

6 Years Ago

Ah, I see what you're saying. Hehe. Thank you!
Noo this is very nicely written, I was torn between seeing it as spiritual or passion filled... Its a good verse especially the first and last lines, which portray feelings of life and love..

Posted 6 Years Ago


its way too spiritual...a good write..liked the last part of this poem..

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 10, 2015
Last Updated on July 10, 2015
Tags: Candle, Poem, Deep, Light, Scent, Cozy

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Omikron
Omikron

Sweden



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