This Moment

This Moment

A Poem by Omikron

Up until this moment
Nothing ever mattered
And everything that ever mattered
Led up to this very moment

 Crystal chandeliers
Cut through the deep darkness
That has covered my eyes
And stained my brain for years

I can finally see through broken pupils
I can finally get to your heart
Where it has been trapped
And held hostage by your cold chest

Take my breath if you must
I will fill it with warmth
So when the frost meets dawn
Your heart will meet mine

And the ice you carry
I will melt with my love
It will become the blood in my body
That makes my heart beat again
Solely for this moment
Solely for one last moment

Together with you


© 2017 Omikron


Author's Note

Omikron
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Effective poem which has its heart at the right place.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very very touching and beautiful, O :-)
I absolutely loved this...
I guess most of us live and wait for that one moment when we can meet the other destined one..the wait seems worthy when our love meets its zenith....
The way you described this poet's feelings is amazing.

This one is filled with beauty, O :-)
Keep up the good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the love, the resolve,and the message that is written this write. " And the ice you carry I will melt with my love" . I agree, love has that power.
Very impactful craft.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful and well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You have done an amazing job on this write. I like this side of your writing the best. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Self sacrifice for one last moment with a loved one. Who wouldn't do this?
I love the way the first stanza sets the scene and does so in such a lyrical way.
The story is told beautifully.
Well done Omikron.
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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